but it definitely needs some redrafting. The roof line should be lower - somehow I miscalculated where to stitch the seam *oops*. Also, the angle that the zipper is at, makes for a very SHORT zipper - the bag doesn't open very much and it was really hard to tuck the lining in and get it straightened out.
I think if I make the bag a bit narrower but taller (and get the roofline right) it'll make a big difference! The original is here, for comparison :D